Assignment 1 Peer Feedback
Positive thing: good integration of hyperlinks and academic references (super current and interesting examples enhanced the reading) Negative thing: work on making writing less clunky…
Assignment 1 Peer Feedback
Positive: Clear writing Actionable Steps for Improvements: Integrate more non-academic references to enhance the detail of the essay Be careful with citations Have more nuanced…
While sharing economy has benefited consumers, there is an increased inequalities in the accommodation and transportation industries.
Topic: While sharing economy has benefited consumers, there is an increased inequalities in the accommodation and transportation industries. Introduction While sharing economy has benefited consumers,…
The Wave of China’s sharing economy: The competition and impact of Didi and the traditional taxi industry
“iPhone Apps” by Daniel Y. Go is licensed under CC BY-NC 2.0. What is the Sharing economy? The sharing economy is an economic model that has risen rapidly…
A3 plan Shiyi Zhao
1. Define my body of writing 2. Define the structure and make sure that each part has a logical order 3. Regarding academic articles and…
Pollyanna’s A3 plan
Inquire for more information (both academic and non-academic) before starting the assignment Read each week’s article carefully Think more critically Combine realistic examples with writing…
Wenhui Guan Individual Action Plan
1. Combine Internet theory with reality. 2. Read more literature and use it correctly. 3. Think from more angles, analyze realistic cases critically, and increase…
A3 Action Plan Donna LI
Cohesive Writing on Methodology: Improve the flow and coherence when discussing the methodology. Consider using clear transitions and signposts to guide the reader. Incorporate Structured…
A3 Action plan Yi Wu
Explore the concept deeper. Use more examples that are relevant to the concept be more specific to each argument. Use more connecting words and be…
A3 Draft Plan- Boxin Qian
Improve my critical ability and writing skills. Critically analyze thoughts on “I” and connect them with academic material Reasonably and clearly plan the content of…