Plan for A3 – Yixuan Zhang
The feedback of A1 that I got from my friends: The structure of this assignment needs to be corrected. Her repeated explanations of the information…
A3 action plan(Yanx)
Suggestions from my A1. The analysis part is not detailed enough, the description of a topic is not specific enough, and the theory used is…
Action plan for future
First priority: Finish A2 Then once that’s done: Collect a variety of suitable readings together before writing the bulk of my argument Research and then…
A3 improvement plan
Things need to be improved: More critical analysis is needed. Too much descriptive description. Analyse the examples in a deeper way. Pay attention to the…
A3 Action Plan.
Citation: Pay attention on the details of citation. Re-check the citation format is important. Examples: Find more appropriate examples connected to arguments Analysis: Provide more…
A3 plan
1.There are many mistakes in the article’s internal reference, and there are many places to pay attention to. 2.It is necessary to pay attention to…
A3 plan
1. Example and argument connectivity and relevance need to be improved 2. Essay logic needs to be improved 3. Examples need to be more in…
Assignment 3 Plan
It should be noted that citations need to appear as hyperlinks in the article. When analyzing a topic you should analyze it from multiple perspectives…
A3 Action Plan
Improve on connecting case studies and examples to ideas/thesis Have more analysis on academic sources More originality in arguments & cases
A3 plan
1.The article’s analysis of the problem is not deep enough 2. it could be more critical. 3.And no hyperlinks. 4.Not enough academic citations.