A3 Plan (Actinia)
Based on the feedback received from the A1 assignment, I think the following points need to be maintained or improved. Positive aspects:· Use coherent clauses…
Based on the feedback received from the A1 assignment, I think the following points need to be maintained or improved. Positive aspects:· Use coherent clauses…
Depth and Exploration: While the article mentions several domains of internet governance, it may benefit from deeper exploration or specific case studies in each area…
Zhirui Tian *FINISHING A2 *What I’m going to do on A3? 1. In A1 I didn’t have a good connection to the theory that we…
Citation Use a combination of academic and non-academic references to provide sufficient evidence and support for my analysis. 2. Depth of analysis Provide detailed analysis…
sentences need further clarification or reorganization to improve readability. Clear writing Integrate more non-academic references to enhance the detail of the essay careful with citations…
Shortcomings that need improvement: Use more authoritative resources to support my arguments The background or definition of the topic needs to be discussed more The…
1. Define my body of writing 2. To establish a coherent structure, it’s essential to arrange each part logically, ensuring clarity and organization. 3. To…
Introduction With the gradual development of science and technology and the popularization of the use of the network, the search engine has become the most…
Yifan Hu The emergence of the Internet has completely changed the way we communicate, obtain information and conduct business. With the continuous development of technology,…
Positive thing: good integration of hyperlinks and academic references (super current and interesting examples enhanced the reading) Negative thing: work on making writing less clunky…