Use more academic articles Improve the fluency of paragraphs and reduce grammatical errors Pay more attention on Reference list It need more natural to combine…

I have to improve my writing skills and I need to analyze deeper of my example in the future assignments. I would research more issue…

In my A3 assignment, the areas I need to improve are: Make the connection between real-world examples and theory more closely integrated. Delve deeper into…

Grammar ——Hyper link should be added to the article, and due to the rapid changes in digital media, recent examples should be used as much…

Do not leave the assignment until the deadline Conduct more research on the topic before writing Engage in deep reading of academic sources Improve critical…

In the future assignment, I’m gonna to increase the diversity of reference, and increase the depth of the analysis of my topic. A3 requires the…

The structure of the paper is not clear. It should be clearly stated at the beginning what the intended content is before proceeding to a…

Improve writing quality improve structures, like make an outline first, ensure each paragraph flows logically into the next and reinforces the main argument Use critical…

Through the peer review, I learned more appropriate ways to use academic citations and examples because my Assignment 1 lacked a compact and reasonable structure…

Information Architecture Kejun LIU (Kimberley) 02/10/2023 SYD Introduction TikTok is an online platform for creating small-length videos known as reels which mainly attract a narrow…