Wenhui Guan Individual Action Plan
1. Combine Internet theory with reality. 2. Read more literature and use it correctly. 3. Think from more angles, analyze realistic cases critically, and increase…
1. Combine Internet theory with reality. 2. Read more literature and use it correctly. 3. Think from more angles, analyze realistic cases critically, and increase…
Research reveals Facebook echo chambers.“Echo chambers” by Luke O’Brien is licensed CC by-NC 2.0. Introduction Pick any of the big topics of the day- referendum,…
KEXIN TANG Step 1: Identify improvement areasThe key areas for improvement are as follows: Clarity: Make sure every idea and paragraph is clearly expressed. Integrity…
1. Example and argument connectivity and relevance need to be improved 2. Essay logic needs to be improved 3. Examples need to be more in…
It should be noted that citations need to appear as hyperlinks in the article. When analyzing a topic you should analyze it from multiple perspectives…
1.The article’s analysis of the problem is not deep enough 2. it could be more critical. 3.And no hyperlinks. 4.Not enough academic citations.
After the peer-review, I have reflected on my own writing. The central thing I want to work on is incorporating my sources more strongly into…
Pay attention to the correct use of language, strengthen the logic between languages. Strengthen correlations between ideas and examples, such as citing more literature I…
Topic: Notice: Strengthen the analysis of the theme, and explain the meaning of the theme more simply and deeply, Understanding of the “Three I’s”. Strengthen…
Their examples are clearer and more data-driven, but the quotes are a bit too long. Improve your own examples, not specific enough. Her thesis focuses…