Assignment 1 Peer Feedback
Depth and Exploration: While the article mentions several domains of internet governance, it may benefit from deeper exploration or specific case studies in each area…
Depth and Exploration: While the article mentions several domains of internet governance, it may benefit from deeper exploration or specific case studies in each area…
“iPhone Apps” by Daniel Y. Go is licensed under CC BY-NC 2.0. What is the Sharing economy? The sharing economy is an economic model that has risen rapidly…
1. Combine Internet theory with reality. 2. Read more literature and use it correctly. 3. Think from more angles, analyze realistic cases critically, and increase…
Research reveals Facebook echo chambers.“Echo chambers” by Luke O’Brien is licensed CC by-NC 2.0. Introduction Pick any of the big topics of the day- referendum,…
KEXIN TANG Step 1: Identify improvement areasThe key areas for improvement are as follows: Clarity: Make sure every idea and paragraph is clearly expressed. Integrity…
1. Example and argument connectivity and relevance need to be improved 2. Essay logic needs to be improved 3. Examples need to be more in…
It should be noted that citations need to appear as hyperlinks in the article. When analyzing a topic you should analyze it from multiple perspectives…
1.The article’s analysis of the problem is not deep enough 2. it could be more critical. 3.And no hyperlinks. 4.Not enough academic citations.
After the peer-review, I have reflected on my own writing. The central thing I want to work on is incorporating my sources more strongly into…
Pay attention to the correct use of language, strengthen the logic between languages. Strengthen correlations between ideas and examples, such as citing more literature I…