Individual Action Plans
In the A1, there are too many unnecessary sentences in my paper. I did not analyze the example deeply and I need to cliaim my…
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A3 Plan
Things I would like to improve in: For my A3 assignment, I would like to do more in-depth research to get more information for the…
Individual Action Plan
Gucy Try to use some academic phrases to describe me, us, them, etc., such as a specific place, group of people or country, etc. to…
Peer review of A1 (individual action for A3)
peer review 1 – Needs to do APA reference more concisely. Got diverse examples and good examples of Facebook. Peer review 2 – providing a…
Individual Action Plan
Feedback: Use more engaging tools to draw in the reader (e.g. setting up the issue before providing a definition, making an engaging title) Examples were…
A3 plan
One of the main points of feedback for A1 was that there was repetition in some of the vocabulary used in the essay. Words like…
A3 Action Plan
For future assignments I will try to: Connect and strengthen the relevance of my examples Add my perspective when wrapping up the essay, when talking…
Individual Action Plan
Reflect on A1: I have the tendency of writing very long sentences, which can make it hard for the reader to grasp my idea. I…
From Transactional to Relational: How the Sharing Economy Promote Social Trust
Sharing=Understanding+Help One of the most remarkable traits of human beings is their capacity for empathy, care and sharing. These qualities are essential for building strong…
The Varied Facets of the Sharing Economy
Introduction: Heard about Airbnb? Booked a co-working space through a digital platform? Sold your old clothes on an online platform for that extra pocket money?…