I got things to work on

1. Work on the references. in-text citations are fine but don’t forget the date and journal link for reference list
2. Add more citing (hyperlinks)<— inconsistent, cuz why one have 4 hyperlinks and the other has 1
3. Work on transitions, don’t just surprise attack to an example without saying anything girl…
4. Got to the point very early on, it’s good but can be expanded more
5. just put more effort okay future me? please?
6. Read the readings more thoroughly, make your ideas stronger and just don’t skim it

1. Doing the readings prepare you for A3 that do be worth most of our grade so you better pay attention
2. Read the assignment through and through
3. Research!
4. Research!!
5. Research!!!
6. Understand the topics, don’t write based on reading one or two paragraphs, be concise
7. Follow the rubrics (like your life depends on it cuz it does)
8. REFERENCE LIST!! REVIEW THAT AND MAKE SURE EVERYTHING’S RIGHT