A3 Plan.
KEXIN TANG Step 1: Identify improvement areasThe key areas for improvement are as follows: Clarity: Make sure every idea and paragraph is clearly expressed. Integrity…
KEXIN TANG Step 1: Identify improvement areasThe key areas for improvement are as follows: Clarity: Make sure every idea and paragraph is clearly expressed. Integrity…
For the PEER REVIEWING, it gives some pros and cons about my essay, which I will correct in the upcoming assignments. positive: A detailed description…
Use scholarly articles Use more academic lamguage Improve the flow of the paragraphs and make words more concise Using better real world examples Choosing a…
Consider potential drawbacks,drivers Provide specific examples Reasons behind and subsequent impacts How to address the challenges Examine ethical, legal and social implications Provide Wider societal…
In my last post, I spent a lot of paragraphs describing the main problem phenomena, rather than having a lot of my own thinking. I…
The feedback of A1 that I got from my friends: The structure of this assignment needs to be corrected. Her repeated explanations of the information…
Suggestions from my A1. The analysis part is not detailed enough, the description of a topic is not specific enough, and the theory used is…
First priority: Finish A2 Then once that’s done: Collect a variety of suitable readings together before writing the bulk of my argument Research and then…
Things need to be improved: More critical analysis is needed. Too much descriptive description. Analyse the examples in a deeper way. Pay attention to the…
Citation: Pay attention on the details of citation. Re-check the citation format is important. Examples: Find more appropriate examples connected to arguments Analysis: Provide more…