Peer Review of A1 (Improvements for A3)
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2023
1.In my opinion,the argument of this article about theliterature is not clearly stated,the views are not clearlyexpressed,and the views of the authors of the citedliterature are not written.2.This article lackscoherence and the logic is not clear enough and needsto be improved.3.The author’s position is not clearenough,there is no clear logic and the sentences arenot very coherent.4.The author does not use enoughfavorable examples to support his point of view.
Individual Action Plans
In the A1, there are too many unnecessary sentences in my paper. I did not analyze the example deeply and I need to cliaim my…
A3 Plan
Things I would like to improve in: For my A3 assignment, I would like to do more in-depth research to get more information for the…
Individual Action Plan
Gucy Try to use some academic phrases to describe me, us, them, etc., such as a specific place, group of people or country, etc. to…
Peer review of A1 (individual action for A3)
peer review 1 – Needs to do APA reference more concisely. Got diverse examples and good examples of Facebook. Peer review 2 – providing a…
Individual Action Plan
Feedback: Use more engaging tools to draw in the reader (e.g. setting up the issue before providing a definition, making an engaging title) Examples were…
A3 plan
One of the main points of feedback for A1 was that there was repetition in some of the vocabulary used in the essay. Words like…
A3 Action Plan
For future assignments I will try to: Connect and strengthen the relevance of my examples Add my perspective when wrapping up the essay, when talking…
Individual Action Plan
Reflect on A1: I have the tendency of writing very long sentences, which can make it hard for the reader to grasp my idea. I…