Some future changes I would like to make for my A3 assignment include:

1. Reshaping how I use my referencing. My feedback is to use more paraphrasing in my writing, rather than in-text references. To achieve this, I will employ my own argument and opinion, whilst using scholarship to support what I am saying.
2. Shortening my sentences and making them more succinct: I need to work on making clear and concise sentences, to make the information easy for the reader to make sense of. Overcomplicating my writing is not necessary and will in turn make my writing clearer.

To achieve these changes, I believe I need to keep in mind my thesis statement and remind myself as I am writing my work of what my opinion is.