Posted By: RUI WANG
2023-10-06
- Conduct more scholarly research and employ more pertinent resources to enhance my arguments with solid data and statistics.
- Be more precise in my examples and offer brief explanations of terms or names to ensure clarity for readers who might be unfamiliar with them.
- Integrate recent examples and comparisons to bolster my argument, ensuring a seamless blend of theoretical and practical insights.
- Elaborate on the reasons for selecting your examples and elucidate how they bolster your argument and their pertinence to the discussion.
- Maintain a transparent and consistent position throughout your writing.
- Employ an increased number of terms and concepts that have been discussed during the course.