Feedback:

• Use more engaging tools to draw in the reader (e.g. setting up the issue before providing a definition, making an engaging title)
• Examples were relevant
• Informative and engaging

What I would like to improve in:

• Clarifying complex sentences
• Allowing myself more time for rewriting/proof reading

Steps for the Next Assignment:

• Complete the essay multiple days before it is due to allow time to review it and rewrite aspects so that it draws in the reader beyond the facts
• Segment my plan by topic and then find a relevant example in dot point form, before fleshing it out
• Reread my paper with fresh eyes to check for moments where I lacked context and need to provide further background/definition
• Introduce aspects of the real world example (e.g. statistics) earlier to actualise the theory