For the PEER REVIEWING, it gives some pros and cons about my essay, which I will correct in the upcoming assignments.

positive:

1. A detailed description of the background.
2. The explanation of the advantages and disadvantages strengthens the ideas presented in the text even further.

negative：

1. Keep the narrative clear and concise.
2. Use academic resources to prove article points.
3. The conclusion can better summarize and reflect on the points discussed in the article.

I’ll take these recommendations up in a3 based on them. First , make sure there are no grammatical errors that interfere with the essay’s consistency. Second, link the instances to the ideas in the essay.