1.There are many mistakes in the article’s internal reference, and there are many places to pay attention to.

2.It is necessary to pay attention to the logic and fluency of the article, whether the article has a clear logic and a clear structure, and whether it reflects the core ideas of the whole paragraph.

3.The understanding of the topic is not deep enough, and the content of the analysis is superficial and not deep enough. In the later writing, we can increase the part of theory and practice to find more suitable examples.